Structural Editing Plus Line Editing

$500.00

Offer includes structural editing and line editing of up to 50,000 words. Delivery of final edited manuscript will be sent within 21 days of initial receipt of the document. Please email your manuscript to caroline@professionalbookeditor.com

Developmental/structural editing includes in-margin comments to improve:

  • Plot

  • Character Development

  • Description

  • Pacing and Flow of the work

  • Writing Suggestions and Tips

  • My reactions, as a reader, regarding your story and work

  • My reactions, as an editor, regarding your story and work

  • Any inconsistencies in your book/story

  • Any missing information your reader may need

  • Recommendations on when rephrasing may be necessary

  • Notes on any other issues I see

My editing and proofreading packages include:

  • Grammar, punctuation, and spelling correction

  • Improved sentence structure

  • Syntax correction

  • Vocabulary recommendations

  • Better flow and clarity in your writing

I edit all genres of work, including sexual content or works that include violence/horror.

You will receive TWO documents from me in return:

  • A Track Changes document, so that you can see all revisions and any optional recommendations I make to improve your writing

  • A final draft including all editing/proofreading changes made with the Track Changes feature removed (this is the clean version)


I will not rewrite your work for you.

It is always valuable to have a second set of eyes read your work. I can offer that, backed up by the education and experience to deliver a polished final draft.


Offer includes structural editing and line editing of up to 50,000 words. Delivery of final edited manuscript will be sent within 21 days of initial receipt of the document. Please email your manuscript to caroline@professionalbookeditor.com

Developmental/structural editing includes in-margin comments to improve:

  • Plot

  • Character Development

  • Description

  • Pacing and Flow of the work

  • Writing Suggestions and Tips

  • My reactions, as a reader, regarding your story and work

  • My reactions, as an editor, regarding your story and work

  • Any inconsistencies in your book/story

  • Any missing information your reader may need

  • Recommendations on when rephrasing may be necessary

  • Notes on any other issues I see

My editing and proofreading packages include:

  • Grammar, punctuation, and spelling correction

  • Improved sentence structure

  • Syntax correction

  • Vocabulary recommendations

  • Better flow and clarity in your writing

I edit all genres of work, including sexual content or works that include violence/horror.

You will receive TWO documents from me in return:

  • A Track Changes document, so that you can see all revisions and any optional recommendations I make to improve your writing

  • A final draft including all editing/proofreading changes made with the Track Changes feature removed (this is the clean version)


I will not rewrite your work for you.

It is always valuable to have a second set of eyes read your work. I can offer that, backed up by the education and experience to deliver a polished final draft.